Is this anatomy ok at least?

[siseñor]

this is a really basic sketch by the way but i was wondering if it looked weird or if the anatomy was fvcked up, especially in the legs. again i know it looks really gross rn but i'm still working on it LMAO

[Massageman]

It's a good preliminary sketch. I like her "gut and butt", actually. A little bit of angularity implies an action-type of figure, but then the face needs to be a bit more angular too. If you are keeping her face, then her BODY needs to be smoothed a bit. I'm sure you understand this on an intuitive level to have gotten a nice starter sketch already.

There are quite a few web sources that shoe how to proportion and rough in figures using varying proportioned ovals. Go over a few of them, get proficient in a "textbook perfect" figure, and then you can work on modifying a basic figure to get more refined looks, ie, athletic, hourglass, skinny, brawny, etc.

[Massageman]

oops *SHOW how to proportion

[Massageman]

Thanks for the MHO.

[TurboKid]

I think the legs look all right in their rough form but typically I think there is going to be more of a dip on the back between glute and hams. What I find my brain kind of confused about though even though I realize it's a WIP is the leading shoulder. Even if it's meant to be stylized and cleaned up, I can't register the delts and connection to scapula so much there.

[TurboKid]

[...] going to be more of a dip on the back between glute and hams [for a woman who has such muscular thighs and glutes] [...]

[TurboKid]

I think if you're going stylized like inkwork with lots of hidden lines, the vital part to get right on that shoulder is the rear delts and the connection of shoulder to scapula... especially on females.

[Dinosaursandanime65]

It’s looks really good. If you think that’s bad you should see Zerathine, he don’t look too good right now, mainly in the waist. Well it’s not that he looks bad I’m just struggling a wee bit on how his waist should look and how it will look when he transforms.

This is the blueprint

Here’s a Robonian with human blood, is her anatomy good? There will definitely be one more feminine Robonian which will be able to turn into my favorite dinosaur. I’m also still trying to decide if I should make a Robonian descended from each Autothot but it seems kinda hard and I still need to draw like one or two more of them, not to mention the past Robonians which the Autothots came from.

[Dinosaursandanime65]

I’m starting to get somewhere with his waist now, but you keep doing you. Fan Dabby Dozy if I do say so myself

[siseñor]

bro wth these drawings are so good! is it like a transformers type thing?
the feminine one looks rlly cool & her anatomy is on point, i love her transformation

[Dinosaursandanime65]

They’re inspired by Transformers, but in this universe it’s impossible for them to turn into things without blood. I can do better ones, they’re someone in my profile in an old question if you want to see

[siseñor]

ok i will

[Dinosaursandanime65]

Oh yeah….. I remember that. He was kind of a pain in the ass to design. For some I just struggled with him even though his official design is almost identical to the blueprint. It’s cool seeing my stuff in Google when the first Conga won’t even be released in 2.5 years.

[ShortCircuit]

It doesn't look bad, it's just that the sketch is still a bit loose to really make a determination about the anatomical accuracy. The only thing I can really make an observation about is the overall proportions, and on that note, the only thing I notice is that the legs are a bit too short compared to the torso. Don't feel bad about it though, because it's an extremely common mistake that almost all artists make when they begin figure drawing. It's because we have a tendency to assume that the legs and the torso are the same length, but in reality, the legs are longer than what you'd expect. I also think part of the reason you shortened the legs is because you were running out of space on the page, so you tried to cram them in. So that's something you have to look out for at the beginning of the drawing. I recommend starting with a line of action that will give you an idea about the length of the figure, and then break it up from there.

[siseñor]

do u think i can fix it if i just stretch the legs out a bit? & dw i do want constructive criticism jaja

[ShortCircuit]

Yeah, you could totally fix it. It may take a bit of erasing though.

[Andres77]

Anatomy is good. Legs are wider because she's wearing pants that are not tight, which is fine. Proportionately it looks very good.
The detail on the face, EXCELLENT!
she's conveying emotion.
That's an exceptional level of detail that's hard to draw, you did well.

[siseñor]

haha thanks & ur right she is wearing trousers

[Anonymous]

I suck at art so i am easily impressed but i can see what you mean now that you have drawn (giggles) my attention to it.

So the problem with the far leg is that the marks inside look sort of like a skeletal xray and Im not sure why they are there.

The near leg should either not have the bulge in the top or should taper evenly into the knee (i think? =S) because as it is atm it seems muscular and i dont think thats what you were going for.

[siseñor]

i have noticed i have a habit of drawing legs quite muscular lmao, thank you for pointing it out c:

[DeeDeeDeVour]

Nothing gross or wrong with it at all.
In fact, it's a very nice sketch.
You have impressive artistic skills.

[siseñor]

thank you : D

[ChrisMaster69]

It’s looking great. It has a flow, fluidity to it.

post again when you finish it

[siseñor]

thank u, i will : )

[ChrisMaster69]

Great I do appreciate someone that can draw.

I totally suck at it.

by the way early morning or late night?

[siseñor]

the drawing?

[ChrisMaster69]

Lol, no when I messaged.

It’s was like 5am or something, I’m in the UK and noticed you were, and was wondering if it was an all nighter or simply waking up early.

Was bit of both for me lol

[siseñor]

lmao same here i usually get up at 5 but i didn't sleep so 💀

[ChrisMaster69]

@siseñor yeah similar, I crashed early but couldn’t sleep, not sleeping means see what’s happening on GaG, as I love the toxic feeling at 3am 😂😂😂

[Pogi-Paddy-2]

Thighs are a tad bit out of proportion. Other than that your drawing is impeccable.

[siseñor]

i find it rlly hard to draw legs in general :/ is there smth i can specifically change?

[teejay828]

Your on the right path. Before covid i would once in a while pose nude for life drawing sessions for mixed artist to draw me. Keep up the good work!!!

[MCheetah]

It could be a bit better, but it's okay.

[siseñor]

do u think u cld tell me how 😭😭

[MCheetah]

Just study anatomy more. Trace some stuff, if you have to. Learn that human bodies are six to eight heads high, and that the thigh is twice the length of the shin and the forearm is twice the length of the bicep and stuff like that.

[doopayo]

Yes, it looks really good. I love your art style

[siseñor]

thanks : D

[Agape93]

Yeah looks good to me

[siseñor]

yaay

[COMMODOREII]

It's looking good. I should be practicing my drawing too. Lol

[NathanDavis]

you've done wonderful on those details.

[clampfan101]

Better than me. Keep it up. 👍

[FunkyMonkee]

Looks fine to me, except for the bat wings.

[Waldoe]

Great eye... and a good start

[oldermale]

Looks good

[msc545]

Very nice!

[Avocadorable]

Look good so far.

[crmoore]

Certainly