If I wrote a story, the villain gets the girl, while the hero saves the world but stays single anyway, how does that sound? It reflects my reality?

[Anonymous]

I am sick and tired of always seeing the hero get the girl while the villain is defeated in a fairy tale-like ending all the time. Harry Potter, Twilight, Hunger Games, 50 Shades of Grey, Star Wars, Marvel Comics, Cobra Kai, it is all the same pile of excrement to me.

The thing is, I am a good person, I try to be as kind as I can, yet it is usually the bullies I know who fall in love and get married. Whether it's the African American who made racist comments to me, the alpha male tough guy who kicked me when he felt like it or the graduate teacher's assistant who made condecending jokes at my expense, they're usually the ones who fall in love and marry and have children.

I am aware that the world does not owe me anything. That is why I try to stay out of trouble, do not buy things that I do not need, try not to take out loans when I can help it, and extend a hand to the people who need it.

However, I can be quite distrusting and cold when I feel people cannot be trusted and only want to be friends with me to get things from me.

That being said, if nobody else will do it, I will be the first to do so. Make it so that the villain (the Joker, Darth Vader, etc.) gets the female lead to fall in love with him. Then the male lead does an unspeakable act of kindness to save the world, but the female lead still lusts for the villain and marries him. Then she divorces the villain due to his abuse and takes all his money in alimony settlements. And finally, the hero lives a quiet, solitary, unmaterialistic life as a hermit, happily ever after.

What say you to this? I think it's more realistic than the usual fairy tale bilge we are exposed to.

[Anonymous]

YOU ARE NOT A HERO ( READ IT )
and he is not a villain

Romans 3:4
Let God be true, and every human being a liar

BOTH YOU AND HIM
are nothing but lying pieces of shit
the girl is nothing but a prostitute whore and also a liar

all 3 of you are garbage

https://www.youtube.com/embed/9PRSchbUMW4

you live a world with nothing but satanist
the women and men love evil
THEY LOVE EVIL

they prefer satan
rather then CHRIST
and you are no better

BELIEVE HIS WORDS

Isaiah 3:16

The women of Zion are haughty, walking along with outstretched necks, flirting with their eyes, strutting along with swaying hips, with ornaments jingling on their ANKLES

DOES THAT SOUND LIKE A LIE
the picture is right there
GODS WORD IN PHYSICAL REALITY

ARE YOU GONNA BELIEVE HIM OR NOT

the women of society are nothing but sex objects
with no love

they have made that choice on their own
LOOK AT THEM

IS THIS WHAT YOU REALLY WANT
don't they just look so smart
hahahahah

if you don't want to listen to GOD CHRIST BLACK PILL

ok you stay in your imaginary world
I WILL SEE THE HUMAN RACE FOR WHAT THEY WANT TO BE
AND FOR THE CHOICE THEY HAVE MADE

but I will give glory to my king
CHRIST ABOVE THE DOME

https://www.youtube.com/embed/SyyrhUKgSso

[Asker]

I am an atheist, but I can see how modern women have become incredibly entitled over the years.

[Opinion Owner]

of course they are entitled we are not raping them
duh

they have become arrogant
think they are better

now if you wanna have value FOLLOW CHRIST
he is the giver of value and life

just know it comes with a price

[jshm2]

The term for that is "anti-hero," and yeah yeah there are shit tons of such stories. They are little to do with real life relationships though.

What you're confused about is your sad, incel tendencies, white knighting, and hero complex is netting you zero coochie. That is a you problem that no amount of fiction is going to solve.

Grow up, kid.

[Asker]

@jshm2 how dare you refer to me as a white knight, when I merely suggested a story that reflected my reality? And this is no anti-hero, the hero will remain single, but the evil one gets the girl. There is no anti-hero such as the Punisher in this. I would make it so that someone like the Joker or the Green Goblin gets this while someone like Superman stays single and lives happily ever after in solitude.

[Anonymous]

I think it depends on the sort of villain you create. Personally I appreciate when a relatable backstory is given to the villain, like Joaquin Phoenix’s joker really made me root for him and understand how he became who he ends up being. But when a story immediately shows the villain murdering, torturing, terrorizing, etc, that is not the person I feel eager to see prevail.

[Asker]

In my life, my antagonists always got the girls. So I am writing it to reflect what I have seen. The villains are exciting and adventurous and women love that. The hero will save the world, but remain single as a solitary hermit.

[Opinion Owner]

Since I can’t read your writing I’ll just take your word on your villains being exciting and adventurous. Both are endearing traits.

[Asker]

But he will be defeated when his wife, the female lead, divorced him and takes all his money in alimony. But the hero, having saved the world, lives happily ever after as a single hermit.

[Opinion Owner]

So is the intent of this story immediate gratification (IE getting the girl instead of the hero), and ultimate defeat? It just seems backhanded to give him a leg up then kick it from under his feet.

[Opinion Owner]

If you want the story to reflect your life, why refer to yourself as a villain when you’ve ultimately been bullied and victimized? Sounds more like you’d write a story about someone in your position getting the girl everyone expected the more popular attractive one to get. Sure that’s been done before, but arguably your idea has too. One of the main keys in writing is that there is nothing new, everything has been done. You are just doing it your own way.

[Asker]

That's when I must say you're wrong. The hero is not popular and is average-looking, hence why he is a hermit, yet he saves the world anyway, despite its fault. The villain is the popular and arrogant "bro type", most likely a marketing manager, a computer programmer or an engineer.

[Opinion Owner]

So would you essentially be portraying yourself as the hero? I guess I am trying to connect the dots here. As a separate idea I do think it’s interesting, but when you say it’s a reflection of your life as a person who’s essentially had a hard time, then why would the villain win?

[Asker]

Not me, since I don't have the means to save the world. But for once, I want to see the villain get the girl, since it happens more often in reality

[exitseven]

Damn, thats cold but I can see your point. It does seem like life is not fair.

[Asker]

@exitseven that is why I look down upon 99% of stories, no matter how popular they are and yearn to write my own in which the hero stays single, while the villain marries the female lead.

[exitseven]

I would try to find a nice girl and ask her out on a date and see if you can be the exception to the rule.

[Asker]

@exitseven I tried many times. I got excuses, swore at, obscene gestures and even racist remarks. You'd be surprised.

[exitseven]

I had a rough go as well but I never gave up.

[Asker]

@exitseven I believe it is being in the right place at the right time then.

[exitseven]

yes, that has a lot to do with it.