Do you think this poem could win back my ex's heart?

[Slingblade1126]

We've been on again and off again for a while. It was my fault. I succumb to the evils of passion and lust! My new GAG crush has pretty much threw me to the curb like a bag of garbage, a Hefty bag, that's black to hide all the shit you should be recycling but you're not. Anyway, I wrote this poem for him. Tell me what you think.

I was your hero, strong and fearless in your eyes and you were softer than the summer skies, young lovers we were so unwise. We all know that time is a teacher and this time I hurt you so, left you crying but baby, please, don't you let go!

Don't count the rainy days, they blow hard and then they're gone. Don't throw out love away, in the darkness before the dawn. You've got to hold on, to all the dreams we've made. Remember those beautiful nights and don't count the rainy days.

[AmandaYVR]

I really don't like rhyming in verse. It's a turn off to me and always reads as an inexperienced writer, in my opinion.

[LazerBean]

I don't know, if you're talking about Papi then I don't think he has good enough taste to appreciate such art.

[Slingblade1126]

He might not appreciate the art of words but you should see the pics he has sent me of himself! Pure art. I'll send you some if you want? I will put a disclaimer on them before I send them. I sent some to Joeldalton without letting him know what they were and I guess he's still going through therapy. My bad!

[LazerBean]

Thank you for the offer, but Im afraid I don't feel interspecies attraction so it would be wasted on me. Sad but true

[Anonymous]

So are you trying to win back your ex or Gag crush?

[boobliker]

you can try and see if he want too