A Poem to Describe My Thoughts of Women

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Embraced in Love
Embraced in Love

I finally finished my poem. I have been working on this for awhile. I might some tweaks but I wanted to see what you guys thought about it. Hopefully my friends will like it. 😎

Woman

By C. Hvizdak


A Work of Art,

An Angel Staring Right Back at Me.

To See Into Your Soul,

The Grandeur of Such a Creation,

As an Art Buff,

Experiencing the Work of A Master,


I Touch My Forehead to Yours,

Trying to Read Your Mind,

Hoping to Express My Thoughts,

Our Noses Touch as I Tilt My Head,

Breathing in Our Essence,

I Touch My Lips to Yours,

A Gentle Touch, Then a Taste,

We Greet Each Other,

Tongues Dancing,


I Run My Fingers Over Every Curve,

Crevice, and Line,

Every Inch of Your Face,

A Perfectly Sculpted Structure,


My Thumbs as a Paintbrush,

Gliding Over Your Eyebrows,

My Fingertips Trace the Edge of Your Eyelashes,

The Color of Your Eyes Touching My Soul,

And Open My Heart,

I Gasp for Air as It Skips a Beat,


I Run My Hand Through Your Hair,

So Soft and Silky, Cool to the Touch,

As Water Running Through a Gentle Stream,


My Love, My Being, My Friend,

A Person Created in God’s Own Love,

Brought to Me As One and Alive.

An Existence You Bring to Me,

Into the Deepest Part of My Soul.


Bound Together We Dance,

Our Momentum Increases and Intensifies,

Into a Passionate Ballet,

Filled With Euphoria,

Our Climax Signals Our Triumph.


Announced to the Universe,

To the Heavens, and to the Angels,

And to Our Lord Father.

A Spark of Light,

Transforms Us Both,

Body and Soul Mingling Together,

A Blessing from Above.


A Person Grows in Grandeur,

Taking Our Breath Away,

A Daughter,

In Her Own Right a Light,

A Word,

To Express and Amplify,

Forever Our Love.

Woman.

A Poem to Describe My Thoughts of Women
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