What is your take on this dating bio?

[Anonymous]

Most Gen Z guys in this world are either economy four-bangers or turbocharged hybrids. I'm the rare naturally aspirated 5.0-liter V8 sigma male.

I'm a 22-year-old software engineering and industrial designing major keeping myself busy with the hobbies I'm passionate about.

✅Uploading pictures I took of a fancy and/or classic car
✅Developing a new app to compete with the big boys
✅Watching documentaries, especially about health or crime
✅Listening to Nightcore/Karaoke versions of 1980s-2000s music to spice up our ears in quite a sexy manner

I've been a member of LA Fitness for more than a month. I'm 5'7½" tall. Either Chick-fil-A or Chipotle is our go-to first date, habibti 🍗🌯

Pictures:

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Third picture

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6/10 or lower

[TheMajesticKing777]

You are gonna give off that cocktail dude vibe with this bio

[TheMajesticKing777]

Cocky*****

[Asker]

Um... regarding cocky
www (dot) futurity (dot) org/confidence-dating-945602/#:~:text=Women%20didn't%20necessarily%20find, willing%20to%20compete%20against%20others.

Replace (dot) with.

[TheMajesticKing777]

It's mostly that first sentence that gives off the vibes, you calling yourself better than others just makes everything else sound like a brag instead of a bio

[TheMajesticKing777]

For example

I'm a entrepreneur

I have a 3 businesses

I have hundreds of friends

I work a major corporation

[TheMajesticKing777]

Now here is the same thing with a cocktail intro

I'm richer than most people on the planet

I'm a entrepreneur

I have a 3 businesses

I have hundreds of friends… [+]

[TheMajesticKing777]

Cocky*

[FictionalCharacter]

This guys sounds nice and he looks 39 years old.