Shall I break up the current leads of my novel or continue their relationship?

[Apulu_Imback]

My novel- 'Where's my date?'

Originally, I was planning to end the relationship of Austin and Allysa but seems like people are liking them as couple. The original plot was to break up Allysa and Austin and then start the finding date saga of Allysa, that's why it's titled, 'Where's my date?'. Unknowingly I also deepend the romance between them.

[SnowedIn]

Don't break them up IF Austin can not be a jerk to Alyssa. Otherwise, she should dump him.

[Apulu_Imback]

Hm this gave me an idea but , no spoilers so you're safe :)

[SnowedIn]

:) :) :) :)

[QuietVerbena]

Challenge their relationship in some way. Maybe make another girl an outsider get a crush on Austin. Or vice versa.

[Apulu_Imback]

I figured out what to do!

[QuietVerbena]

Awesome! I love your newest chapter.

[Apulu_Imback]

Thank you!

[serious]

Well, if it is liked by people then you should continue with their relationship.

[Apulu_Imback]

Yes I shall do that then

[Jamie05rhs]

Well, are they a good couple?

[Apulu_Imback]

Well I would say yes but the way they define love is completely different.

[Jamie05rhs]

What do you mean?

[Apulu_Imback]

They are great couples, but the way they view love is different

[Jamie05rhs]

How is it different?

[Apulu_Imback]

That's what's special and unique about this novel. They view love in complete opposite way and opposite attracts so yeah

[Apulu_Imback]

I am sounding like a stupid but you will get to know about it once you read this chapter
Chapter 7: What is love? (Novel- Where's my date?)

[Apulu_Imback]

Chapter 7: What is love? (Novel- Where's my date?) ↗

[Jamie05rhs]

@apulu_Imback. I am sorry for the delay. I want to read your story tonight. Can you remind me please by replying to this comment?

[Apulu_Imback]

Ah sure but sorry for few hours late reply by me too. I just woke up, you see.

[Jamie05rhs]

@Apulu_Imback Thank you so much! And haha don't worry.

[Jamie05rhs]

Okay- I read the story. Very nicely written.
I don't think their views of love are different. He is simply describing one form of love, while she is describing all of them. She is zoomed out farther on the camera.

[Jamie05rhs]

Now I find it interesting that in your question you're talking about breaking up their relationship. Because it doesn't sound to me like they have a relationship YET.

[Apulu_Imback]

No they aren't in a relationship. They just like each other and in that 'get to know' dating stage. And thank you!

[Jamie05rhs]

Okay. You're welcome!

[Teriyaki70]

What 😶

[Apulu_Imback]

Um it's about my novel, you can check them out in my mytakes if you want to.

[Teriyaki70]

Oh gotcha 👌