What do you think about my poem about my mom?

[Anonymous]

my mom is a good person but can be rude. like we’ll laugh & tell each other stories but you can ask her a simple question & her tone will be rude or she won’t answer & you’ll have to keep asking sometimes. So i was surprised when she told my brothers i’ve been helping out a lot

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Not all at once loll

[KnewHOUSE]

That poem you don't plan to give to your mom do ya.
Your is sad and should only be ready by you that feel that way. your mom still take care of you your not homeless like other kids you have food on any plate you get to put all and all.
Your POEM is just for you to read not to get award.

[Asker]

Just wanted to see what others thought i’m not letting her read it.

[KnewHOUSE]

I think you should change the title
Your poem had nothing about being religious you going to get her mad with that headline.
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[Asker]

she’s not reading it