I wrote a poem to my boyfriend?

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he left me because I told my boyfriend that there is no one more beautiful than me until I have a daughter.
I wrote a poem for him to forgive me.

Don't let our lovemaking all night end
Let the shadow fall on your hair, my love fire
Beware, be my sun, take me warm
Let the warm smell of your face remain in my hands

My heart is in nonstop cries
Whatever you do I can never leave you
Don't take it lightly, love hits you
Don't think it's that easy, my boy

İs it nice?

[Hazelstar99]

That's beautiful what you wrote. This reminds me of myself. Just don't send him. He probably not value

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Thank you for your answer :(

[Trooper205]

I think it's Beautiful 💘

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This is the English translation of a Turkish song. If you like it, you can listen to the song

Yıldız Tilbe- Delikanlım

Please listen. I wonder what you will think

[Anonymous]

makes you sound desperate and clingy and kind of pathetic

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Really? ;(

[Unit1]

No. He's just not romantic.

[JosyJosy]

I don't think a poem will get him back

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Why? :(

[JosyJosy]

A poem wouldn''t make me forget the words you said, and I'm not really a fan of this kind of love language

[Çalgıcıkarısıbinnaz]

I hope he doesn't think that way either :(

[KralArthur]

So good. Congrats.

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Really? Thank you! :)