I want to say something to her and I want to know if this is good?

“Look? You did something to me, it might not have been intentional but you did. Alex you’ve made me a lot happier and I honestly want to do the same for you. I’d be happy to do so as your pet or your romantic partner, either way I’d just be happy to share the world’s pleasures with you.”

I put question marks instead of her name so that nobody can look her up. Anyways our relationship is friends with benefits but admittedly I kinda fell for her XD.
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