How's this paragraph I wrote for my girlfriend?

[Anonymous]

Shweet, I really didn't think I could ever be with anyone else, i never thought I could love another human being after all that happened but then the most unexpected person came and now what I feel for you is so much more than I could ever imagine. Now I think I know what that feeling is called because whenever I think of you, when I see you, when I get a text from you, i get a feeling which can only be defined as LOVE ❤

Good enough

Needs work

[Guy13]

Not you. If she’s not all-in like you then scared away. No idea.