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What do you all think about this paragraph I wrote for my girlfriend?

(Here Shweet is her nickname, Ok so this paragraph is totally random I just want to tell her how much I love her) Shweet, I'm really grateful that we see each other everyday and we talk everyday too believe me I'm really grateful for that but our relationship has come to a point that I really want to be with you and by be with you I mean being with you alone when it's just us and the wonders of this world, the world is our canvas and we're the artists and it's up to us to make it the most beautiful work of art anyone has ever laid their eyes upon, being with you is so much different than talking through texts when I'm with you alone I can experience the butterflies I feel around you, i can be the only one who can experience the gorgeousness of your shweet face, I can smell the beautiful aroma your hair gives, I can take you in my arms and make you feel the safest you'll ever feel and make every pain go away and most importantly I can put my lips on yours.

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