Original poems that may or may not be crap


Breeze gently carries particles

Of being- sediments

At the bottom of the glass-

Crumbs ignored

In the storm's bitterness.

A low rumble like that from

The mysterious hollow of

Chest, a breeze limited

To warning sound of nearing

Wasteland, evergreens breaking the

Promise of their namesake-

The stifling unbreathing

As if flat ground became mountain

Killing off animals-

The forest can no longer

Speak, and I am wordless with it.

What is it to miss being, breathing?

Is the name of the woods

Forgotten in steep unrest?

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Although winter has passed,

Je n'en peux plus

Spring- time moves strangely then,

Abysmal width

Melting with icicles

Replaced by rain,

We all adjust to heat

As if it had

Never neglected us,

Left us to die

Feebly praying for chance.

Spring is meant for

Remembering the cruel

Eyes of winter,

And flourishing in spite.

(This is my brother's eye)
(This is my brother's eye)

I flew soul low

On the wing of an unborn plane

Without feathers, blinding paleness

Of flawed design loudly brooding,

Popped eardrum upon anti-gravitation

Thinking, this is where barriers are broken

Down and decomposed in re-shoveled dirt

Having never seen the prism of color before,

Dirt was, in abundance, valued and loathed

Perhaps more the former if bodies remained exposed

To that ceaseless prism of blue and of stars,

Dharma wheel forgotten.

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The unopened eyes of fetuses

In neglected womb of mother

Not hatefulness, nor a matter

Of mistaking chance for regret,

But unknowing how to conceive

What into this world appears

At childhood, a chance, deception

Of aging once their perceived

Snow spirits melt from pupils

Wide circles that see unknown

To non-child, a clue is all-

How short-lived that life in a

Life-time is, not yet knowing

How future storms were upon us all.

Original poems that may or may not be crap
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Original poems that may or may not be crap
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  • SteveSmith1985
    Ok... These are good... Like really REALLY good. I'm not so much into "poetry" itself, but my entire life I've felt a strong connection to some artist's lyrics. Which, depending on the artist has a lot of the same elements as poetry.

    I have also had many, many, many, (many!) female friends and acquaintances who have shared theiramateur poetry with me. This stands out as exceptionally good. Then becomes doubly impressive given your age.

    P. S. "I flew soul low" - I freaking love this... So much.

    I'm doubt you happen to be a fan of NOFX, but I think you stumbled upon a variation of the kind of word-play that made me fall in love with them: "I got soul doubt" (I got sold-out)

    Keep writting 👍
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    • Wow! Thank you so much :)

    • You're most welcome! I look forward to reading your work in the future πŸ™‚

  • Mexicoman101
    I enjoyed them. Can’t help but think of ecology while reading. The poems were all very naturalistic, relaying relatable observations and grievances with the relationships and dynamics of man and the environment.
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  • Daniela1982
    How is this a question?

    There once was a gal named Fluff
    Who loved to sun bathe in the buff
    She fell asleep in the sun
    toasted her right and left bun
    And all sorts of other stuff.
    Is this still revelant?

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What Girls & Guys Said

  • smahala1991
    Love these
  • Jjpayne
    That was pretty awesome!!! Have your shown this to an English tutor? It might be worth entering this into a special magazine or collection of works. It's that good
  • monkeynutts
    Jammed pack with lots of imagery.
    Atmospheric, somber, melancholic.
  • GiveMeAllTheCookies
    I am not a poem person, but I really love this tree photo. It makes me nostalgic in a good way.
  • NoPoliticsPleeease
    I like it. I have a lot of poems online I am not gonna share them on here though too personal.
  • GoodGuyBreakingBad
    Very good poems thanks for sharing :)
  • TonyMetal_86
    Nice one fluff the fluffy girl 😊
  • ChiPaPa
    These are awesome
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  • IlyaTheImpaler
    I hope I have a good day too
  • bossplaya
    It's a pussy fart
  • Secretgardenblood
    Good take